i really liked your attention grabber and I was impressed by the manner in which you really portrayed what the problem is. You helped customers to truly visualize the need that exists and then you offered a solution to the issue. I would be careful in your use of hand motions throughout the pitch. Although they certainly can be useful, it's important to make sure that they don't become distracting.
Hi Lauren, I thought that your Elevator pitch video was very good! I liked how you knew all of the information and the video flowed well because of it. I also liked your idea a lot. It can really be hard to find the cause of health issues if it is only a food allergy. Overall, I thought it was a great video and a great idea.
i really liked your attention grabber and I was impressed by the manner in which you really portrayed what the problem is. You helped customers to truly visualize the need that exists and then you offered a solution to the issue. I would be careful in your use of hand motions throughout the pitch. Although they certainly can be useful, it's important to make sure that they don't become distracting.
ReplyDeleteHi Lauren, I thought that your Elevator pitch video was very good! I liked how you knew all of the information and the video flowed well because of it. I also liked your idea a lot. It can really be hard to find the cause of health issues if it is only a food allergy. Overall, I thought it was a great video and a great idea.
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